At the beginning of the school year I was a poor writer.
I didn’t know how to organize my information and sometimes had problems by giving to many details that soon I would end up taking about something else.
English 1 has really helped me a lot on this year, my two week spots have been developing into a much higher level.
An example of my development would be the position paper of the God’s; Narcissus was a demi-god he hurt many women by breaking their hearts. His looks were entreating to any women that came on contact with him.
Sephorah and I came up with a punishment, which was to cage Narcissus in a cave for the rest of his life with nothing but himself, so he can sufferer and think of all the bad deeds that he did.
Even though are punishment wasn’t chosen, we still think that narcissus would have really learned from his mistake
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